Hello people, this is my Father figure piece of writing I did in lock down. It has things like why I like my father figure and what I'm thankful for. Please leave me a comment.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 26, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Thank you for sharing your work with us you did in writing today Briana!
ReplyDeleteThose are some very nice words about your dad.
I look forward to reading your next blog post.
Miss Lauder 🌸
Hi Briana, Next time you might want to screenshot your writing or copy and paste (without formatting) so that we can read your writing easier.
ReplyDeleteYou have shared some lovely things about your Dad though, he sure sounds special.
Miss McLeod