Hi guys! this is My Planet earth and on D.L.O. It involves things like how big the planet is and facts about it. My favorite in Uranus ( as you can tell) I loved making this because I learned a lot of new facts as well! I think I did well with the information. I think I can work on not making the writing so chunky. Please leave me a comment
Friday, August 13, 2021
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Hi briana im Noami from South Hornby School,I like the way you added lots of facts.I think you should work on making it more exciting and not really basic
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