Tuesday, June 2, 2020
Welcome to my first blog post!
Hi readers, Welcome to my first blog post. this is my writing comic. its about 2 girls going to school for a day. lease leave a comment. that will tell me if you read the whole thing.
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hi Briana. i loved the way you used detail. i wonder how long it took you to make this comic. next time you could ask what the girls name was??
ReplyDeleteoh yeah, good idea, that will really help when people read. thanks for commenting
DeleteKia ora Briana,
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome first post! This is a great comic. I like the way that it follows a day at school. Your speech in each of the frames makes it really clear to understand what the characters are doing. What is your favourite subject at school?
- Miss Morgan
Hi miss Morgen, thanks for replaying, my fav school subject is maths
Deletehi Briana
ReplyDeletei loved the part when in sport in free time it said u good why did you make it about school what made you think about making this.
talofa Mia,
Deletethank you for replaying to my post, this was a thing we could puck from writing.
from Briana