I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, June 19, 2020
Bula and welcome to another blog post!
hi guys! i made a suggestion that josh made, its PICK A PATH!! i really hope you like it. please leave me a comment
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeleteBula Briana,
ReplyDeleteI love that Josh has encouraged you to do a pick-a-path story. Have you seen the ones on the Team Raupo blog? There are amazing, check them out here and comment https://teamrauposhs2020.blogspot.com/
I chose to report the gun to police in your story. I wonder if you can create another one that would be suitable for junior students, they may be a bit scared of guns (as I am !) I can't wait to read another pick-a-path story of yours!
Mrs McIntyre
Eli jones i like your pick a path i finish you pick a path i really like ir it was fun
ReplyDeleteEli Jones i like your pick a path it was really fun it made me think of a kidnapper move
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